Phonograph 5

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Re: Phonograph 5

Unread post by lms_jam »

Hello everyone thanks for your feedback I have the finished ace of spades to show you and now it's off to redesign the tuck box.
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Re: Phonograph 5

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I think this ace works better. It fits the overall design of the rest of the deck. Seeing the drawings makes me want to see a drawing of Edison and Tesla trying to strangle each other and/or thumb wrestle each other. (Yeah, I am wierd). I too would like to see a four deck option after looking at your first two decks. I am in.
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Re: Phonograph 5

Unread post by TGunitedcardists »

I think Ace is alright but...

The face looks fine. I think the ribbon on both the top and bottom feel too straight. I'd like to see a version without the ribbon at all. Move the Phonograph in red down where the the "No. 5" is and combine to make Phonograph No. 5. I think the purple with the lines doesn't work. The ribbon at the bottom right is too close to the spade indicie under the "A". At the top left, it isn't. This makes the card misaligned. I'd like to see and actual phonograph somewhere on the ace. There has to be a way to sneak one in at the bottom!
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