I Wrote A Screenplay

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I Wrote A Screenplay

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Hey everyone!
So these past few months I've been working on a full length comedy screenplay. It's been a passion of mine for some time now and hopefully I can pursue one day making this into a movie. Well as of today I finished the first draft so I'm really excited I pushed myself.

It is a full length movie (116 pages to be exact) but was hoping to get feedback from as many people as possible. Keep in mind this is a very raunchy comedy, I really wanted the reader to laugh out loud and say to themselves "What the f--k!".

Here is the link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B82x72 ... JwZWc/view" onclick="window.open(this.href);return false;

Synopsis: Three best friends Kyle, Todd and Phil continue to work at a run-down movie theater for a living. Kyle, an inspiring movie writer, wants more in his life than just the same routine. After running out of creative ideas, Kyle turns to his own life for inspirations.

BIG thank you to anyone who reads it and gives some feedback of my work.

Thank you!
Sean Whelan
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Re: I Wrote A Screenplay

Unread post by Levent Suberk »

At first glance it reminds me Smoke, written by Paul Auster, directed by Wayne Wang. However your screenplay is different.
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