Carbon - input welcome

Designing a deck? Need input? Show us here!
User avatar
davegk
✔ VERIFIED Designer
✔ VERIFIED Designer
Posts: 466
Joined: Mon Oct 08, 2012 11:01 am
Location: Oakland, CA
Has thanked: 1 time
Been thanked: 290 times
Contact:

Carbon - input welcome

Unread post by davegk »

Hey all,

I have a deck design concept that I came up with some months back and wanted to get some input from y'all...

Thanks,
David
carbon.jpg
David Goldklang, Product Designer
http://davidgoldklang.com
http://www.vandacards.com
User avatar
blejanre
Deck Artist
Deck Artist
Posts: 68
Joined: Sun Sep 13, 2015 6:54 pm
Player: Yes
Decks Owned: 3
Location: manitoba, ca
Has thanked: 5 times
Been thanked: 12 times

Re: Carbon - input welcome

Unread post by blejanre »

I like the design a lot, oil swirls come to mind. The rank index is a bit too lengthy for comfortable play, the suit index is a bit small. King looks great, I really like the composition and style. The back design could trade the full bleed fan things for a thinner border. Like the pips, dislike the tuck. "Carbon" could be bigger and in a hand done font using the languid, oily style of the king and back. I don't think the back design works well on the front of the tuck. Instead of a modern, minimalist design like you've got, I'm picturing a much more graphic, busy sort of printing press design. More on the tally ho side of things. Those are my thoughts, would love to see where this goes.
-Ben
Post Reply

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 42 guests