Redesigned. Something i tried.

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Redesigned. Something i tried.

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Something i began with a few days ago. I would like to hear your opinion :D

http://fujismoke.deviantart.com/art/Red ... -330802110
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That's pretty cool! I wish there was a little more detail to the background, like if the lines made more of a pattern.
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Assassino13 wrote:That's pretty cool! I wish there was a little more detail to the background, like if the lines made more of a pattern.
do you mean the middle part or the border? thanks for the feedback by the way ;)
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I don't think that pink fits it but the design is still cool! I also think that it seems empty. There is too much empty space IMO. Definitely a great start!
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I agree, you have a good start, but the pink doesn't do it for me and the RR design for some reason makes me think of Rolls Royce... which is not good if you're shooting for something unique.
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I changed a bit of the Back Design even though i left the pink because i kinda like it. I'll probably try another color soon though :D
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Well now i tried to do a black & a white version :D
The first one is the "Light Edition", the second one the "Shadow Edition"
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Very pretty back ! Continues !
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well, i finally found time to start redrawing the court cards. since i love the simplified court cards that the smoke&mirrors have i attempted something similar.

this is not a deck that i want to have printed it's just something i do for fun whenever i find free time :)

so here's the Jack of Hearts though i haven't added the pips or indices yet.
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well i think this one looks much better since i improved the way of doing the hair and also i tried a slightly different method for some thinner lines.
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Light and shadow? The backs look wayyy smoke and mirrors, but that is what you're going for right?
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Sinsandman wrote:Light and shadow? The backs look wayyy smoke and mirrors, but that is what you're going for right?
The court cards also look A LOT like the S&M courts.
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Yeah i know I'm doing these just for fun so i don't mind if it looks like something that exists already but I'm still doing these by hand :D ... well computer but still.
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